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29 April 2007 @ 02:53 pm
DW Fic: Kiss Me Later (1/1)  
Title: Kiss Me Later (1/1)
Author: [info]teskafuture
Rating: PG
Pairing: Ten/Rose
Setting: AU somewhere in season 2.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my sonic screwdriver.
Author's Note: Many, many thanks to [info]humansrsuperior, [info]jagwriter78, and [info]dnamadscientist for their awesome beta skills. And to [info]rhoboat for her encouragement as well.

Summary: Those were the words that now plagued Rose to keep her from reaching a state of sweet unconsciousness. She was sure that it was going to haunt her until she did something about it. Sighing in frustration, she began to work through the inevitable conclusion that this was all his fault. Well, there was clearly only one thing to do. She had to follow through.


Rose softly allowed her body to sink further into her mattress. Her eyes continued the steady vigil of staring at the ceiling. The gentle hum of the TARDIS was usually a soothing, comforting feeling; however the thoughts of earlier in the day kept her from finding that daily peace.

She was surrounded. And the Doctor was nowhere to be found. Typical. He was probably working on some daft idea to save the day at the very last moment. The reptilian-looking alien standing before her attempted what she could only conclude was some form of laugh. Her mouth twisted in disgust as the air was expelled in her face. “You need a mint,” she said, quite seriously.

“Can’t help you there,” a voice spoke, and Rose’s face lit up as the alien turned around to face the Doctor, the characteristic maniac grin spread across his face.

“I’m glad to see you,” Rose breathed, relief flooding through her body as the clear knowledge filled her that they would get out of this alive. They always did.

The Doctor sauntered past the outer rim of the guarding aliens to stand beside her. “You can kiss me later,” he said teasingly in her ear before turning to address her head captor.

What prompted the next words out of her mouth was still a mystery, but as clear as day, in her voice, she heard the words, “I’m gonna hold ya to that,” coming out of her mouth.


Those were the words that now plagued Rose to keep her from reaching a state of sweet unconsciousness. She was sure that it was going to haunt her until she did something about it. Sighing in frustration, she began to work through the inevitable conclusion that this was all his fault. Well, there was clearly only one thing to do. She had to follow through.

By the time she reached the control room, it was aglow in its steady bath of calming blue light. Looking around, Rose found the Doctor exactly where he was always was...under the console. She quickly surmised that something must have been amiss with the dear old girl, for all she could see was the top of his head, the hair shooting in every direction that physics would allow. She decided not to analyze the perverse pleasure she felt at his frustration. It appeased her after the sleepless night she was experiencing. For a moment, she wondered if she should abandon the plan and just go back to staring at her ceiling. He would never know she was there.

Of course, at that point, it was too late as the rest of his head popped up into view. The look of intense concentration immediately turned to concern when his eyes landed on Rose. “Rose, what’s wrong?”

“Nothing’s wrong,” she replied, her tone convicting her of the fallacy she just uttered. The perceptive Doctor leapt from beneath the floor to her side, and for a moment just stared, a single eyebrow cocked high in curiosity. Rose instinctively moved away from him, her brow furrowed. Patiently, he waited as they stood there in silence. This was not part of the plan. There he was, having started this whole problem to begin with, and he was behaving like there was nothing out of the ordinary! She needed to get the upper hand, but how? Rose finally turned her eyes to look at him. He was still just standing there, awaiting her next move. “What are you doing?” she finally asked.

The Doctor ignored the question by asking his own. “Are you sure you’re all right? You should be asleep in bed. And you just lied about nothing being wrong. Something on your mind? It seems quite obvious that you have consciously or unconsciously come to me to solve your problem.”

“Really?” she answered as she glided to the chair, promptly dropping her bum into the seat, and crossing her arms. Well, there was her opportunity. Summing up all her courage, she dismissed all thoughts of abandoning the plan. Time to proceed, full speed ahead. A slight smirk threatened to break across her lips as the tip of her tongue pushed its way past her teeth. “I do have a problem,” she said slowly.

The Doctor responded by placing himself before her as he leaned against the console. “And it’s keeping you from sleeping?” Rose sighed in despair and nodded, carefully ensuring that her eyes did not make contact with the Doctor. The teasing light reflected in them would certainly give her away, and she was going to fully enjoy this. “What is it?” he asked.

“You see, I told someone I would do something…but I haven’t.” Rose let her eyes drift up to his face for just a moment, before quickly dropping them again. She began to take an intense interest in her hands which were presently sitting in her lap. This teasing was continuing to entice her courage to actually follow through with this plan. How long could she keep up the ruse?

“Well, that is easily solved,” the Doctor responded, flabbergasted that this would be such an issue to keep Rose from her rest. “Just stop procrastinating and do it.”

Oh, it was clear that Rose was going to lose all semblance of seriousness at this point. Her eyes shot up to catch his, a wide grin stretched to keep it from becoming a laugh. “Well, who am I to argue with the Doctor’s advice?” she resolved, jumping off the seat and finding herself toe to toe with the man in front of her.

Her eyes dropped to his mouth for an instant as her hands moved to caress the back of his tie. “Rose…” he began, but no other words could escape as his mouth was further engaged in a more pleasurable occupation.

Rose felt his shocked reaction as she continued her sweet assault. But soon his hearts sent a message before his mind could issue a warning, and Rose felt the tie she held so tightly go limp as he leaned in closer to reciprocate the pressure.

Instantly, Rose swiftly pulled back, subconsciously fearing he would end it first, but fully intending to leave him frustrated after he put this idea in her head at the start. She watched his Adam’s apple bob as the Doctor stared at her in shocked silence. This caused Rose’s tongue to once again make a slight appearance.

“W-why?” he managed to question through parched lips. He slowly wetted them, instantly regretting it as the taste of her lip balm inadvertently triggered a skip in his hearts at the recent memory.

Oh, revenge is such a sweet dish. And the lost look on his face was worth each moment she spent staring at the ceiling in contemplation of this exact event. Rose managed to infuse the most innocent face she could muster as she replied, “You told me to.”

The light of understanding rapidly surfaced in his eyes as his synapses retrieved the memory in question. Slowly, the Doctor nodded. “Yep, I did, didn’t I?” He paused, looking into the face of the blonde, her eyebrows high on her forehead in anticipation of his response. Then that wide schoolboy grin crossed his face. “Well, I certainly can’t fault you for that then, can I?” he said, turning away from her and bouncing around the console, flipping switches at the same rapid speed as his mouth, “If I tell you to do something later, I shouldn’t be surprised if you follow through, now should I? I mean, to expect you wouldn’t do it would then be hypocritical of telling you to do it in the first place. So, we’ll just leave it that, shall we?”

Rose stood, watching his dance with the TARDIS, only partially catching the erratic speech, but feeling very much disappointment at the reaction. Was he seriously going to just consider that this never happened? Maybe it was for the best.

The Doctor paused in his sequence to see that he had lost Rose somewhere along the way. “Oh, and Rose,” he said, softly enough to gain her attention again. She looked up at him, unsure of the strange expectancy that filled her. “You should give a little more warning before you do that next time.”

The smile returned to her face as the implications of his words reached her brain. Her feet began to reduce the distance between them. “Um, Doctor?” she inquired, the teasing light in her eyes returning. She waited until he looked up to see her beside him. “Here’s your warning.”

The End
 
 
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firefaery2[info]firefaery2 on April 29th, 2007 07:13 pm (UTC)
SOO cute!
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 29th, 2007 07:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
misssara11: DW Goodnight TARDIS[info]misssara11 on April 29th, 2007 07:26 pm (UTC)
Aw, that was sweet. I liked it a lot.
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 29th, 2007 07:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I love reading fluff, so now I wrote one. *grin*
98.75% guaranteed[info]ivydoor on April 29th, 2007 07:33 pm (UTC)
Awww! That was too cute! Love it! We need more fluff.
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 29th, 2007 07:34 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Indeed, I love fluff. Makes it easier to get through the week...though not so much this week. *grin*
Deborah: D + R[info]blaidd_wolf on April 29th, 2007 07:39 pm (UTC)
I have much <3 for this fic. Much <3. :)
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 29th, 2007 11:49 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you very much. Love the icon!
scifiangel[info]scifiangel on April 29th, 2007 10:39 pm (UTC)
Wonderful!!! Doing the happy dance!
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 29th, 2007 11:49 pm (UTC)
*grins* Glad to have provided that! Thank you.
humansrsuperior: facetoface[info]humansrsuperior on April 30th, 2007 12:01 am (UTC)
It's amazing, teska! You know I LOVES it!! Keeping in my favorites!! ^_^ *squeeeeeeeeee!* I want to write fun fluff now!!!
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 12:04 am (UTC)
Thank you! I want to read your fun fluff too! *grin* Maybe we can push each other's muses for more.
humansrsuperior: facetoface[info]humansrsuperior on April 30th, 2007 12:05 am (UTC)
Well, I think you know what I *want* to write about, but I need something a little more substantial to work with, like, an actual plot to follow. =D
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 12:09 am (UTC)
Aha. Yes, plot does help the muses... hmm... thinking... plot, plot, plot... what for a plot...
humansrsuperior: facetoface[info]humansrsuperior on April 30th, 2007 12:13 am (UTC)
Heh, if you come up with anything, do lemme know. =D
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 12:21 am (UTC)
As a fluff piece or a chapter piece?
humansrsuperior: facetoface[info]humansrsuperior on April 30th, 2007 12:23 am (UTC)
Er.........well, I meant fluff, but whatever. =D I mostly just wanna get my idea I have now outta the way, it's killing me! *pulls hair in frustration*
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 12:24 am (UTC)
I'm not sure I know what that idea is. Can I help or you just working this one out in her head?
humansrsuperior: facetoface[info]humansrsuperior on April 30th, 2007 12:26 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm sure you could help. Basically all the idea is I wanna do a fic involving that yummy neck freckle I mentioned on my LJ earlier. =D But ya know, you can't just write Ten/Rose fluff like that just because, you have to some something to follow, ya know? A reason for them to get close and all that. Yeah. That's where I'm stuck. Hehe.
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 12:29 am (UTC)
Oh yes, that one! *giggles* You got somewhere I can PM you? I can try to prod ideas for fluff. (If you want, you should be able to email me.)
humansrsuperior: facetoface[info]humansrsuperior on April 30th, 2007 12:30 am (UTC)
You can PM me on TF. =]
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 12:41 am (UTC)
Done!
rhoboat[info]rhoboat on April 30th, 2007 04:24 am (UTC)
Hey! No need to credit me, 'cause, y'know, I didn't do any thing really. But I do appreciate it still. (((hugs))).

That was too cute. In just a few sentences, you got the Doctor's penchant for rambling down pat. Rose was abso-frelling-lutely brilliant. Thanks for sharing!!!
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 04:27 am (UTC)
But you did...without you and HRS, I'd never have had the courage to continue writing it! *hugs*

I knew I had to get some rambling in there. It's just not the Doctor without it. *hehe*
starlightmoonla[info]starlightmoonla on April 30th, 2007 06:34 am (UTC)
Very lovely piece of fluff! In addition to the characters being spot on I always enjoy the way certain elements from the new series are used in D/R fics!

The Doctor sauntered past the outer rim of the guarding aliens to stand beside her. “You can kiss me later,” he said teasingly in her ear before turning to address her head captor.

This is my favorite part mostly because I get two variations of the same line and I definitely loved the interaction between the Doctor and Rose more! Too cute!

Thanks for sharing your story!
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 10:19 am (UTC)
Thank you very much. That was exactly what inspired this piece to be written as I was discussing with friends what would it be like if it had been Rose. *grin*
KathyB: DW Adorkable[info]kb91 on April 30th, 2007 08:46 pm (UTC)
Aww, adorable! Gotta love the fluff. Keep it coming! :)
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on April 30th, 2007 09:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you...and I have to agree, I just love fluff, thought it was time to contribute it. *grin* And I love the icon, btw. Definitely adorkable. *grin*
Anne[info]xfilesannie on June 22nd, 2007 01:40 am (UTC)
I love love LOVE this! :)
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on June 22nd, 2007 01:50 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! This was my first fic in the world of Doctor Who. *grin*
Anne[info]xfilesannie on June 22nd, 2007 02:12 am (UTC)
You're welcome. :) I really enjoyed this story and the other one of yours that I read. Do you have a tag for your fic or whofic? I'd love to read more. EEEE!!! Just noticed form your tags - you're an X-Phile too! :)
Teska Future: X-Files[info]teskafuture on June 22nd, 2007 02:28 am (UTC)
On the right underneath my mini-message I have a list of all my fics. So far, I only have the 2 Doctor Who ones, so you've read all I have on that account. The rest are X-Files related. *grin* Though, right now, I only have my XF satires up here and none of the 'real' X-Files related ones.

Oh, I'm definitely a Phile. Been a Phile a lot longer than a Whovian. *grin* I used to be quite active on the Official Site's forum back in the day. *grin*
Anne: lostskateduchovny[info]xfilesannie on June 22nd, 2007 02:42 am (UTC)
I will definately check out your X-Files fics. I've been an xphile forever! Actually, when I really think about it it's scary, because I have been into X-Files for more than half my life. I started watching in the season 3 rerun season and was hooked. I never went to the official FOX forums, but I used to hang out in the AOL X-Files chat room wwwaaaayyyy back when.
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on June 22nd, 2007 02:52 am (UTC)
Ah... you've been one longer than I. I came in on the last 3 minutes of Season 7. *hehe* I heard Scully say she was pregnant, and even I, who didn't really know what was going on went: WHAAAAT? I then watched 8 seasons in 8 months. *grin*

Well, if you check out the X-Files fics, the Therapix ones are about a bunch of Philes and the twisted fics are about a shipper being thrown into parallel universes where everything is wrong. *grin*
Anne[info]xfilesannie on June 22nd, 2007 03:24 am (UTC)
Oh yes, the Scully's pregnant story...Quite honestly I can't even remember my reaction to those few lines. I think I was more caught up with the shippy awesomeness that was Requiem and the fact that Mulder was gone. :( I kind of pretend seasons 8 & 9 didn't happen - but that didn't stop me from watching select scenes in Per Manum 8x08, Empecedolces 8x17 & Existence 8x21 tons of times. Yes, I'm scary and know episode numbers :P. I will definately check out your XF satires.

I am a relative newbie to Doctor Who - so you most likely have me beat in that arena. I just started watching in March. I have since watched all of seasons 1, 2, and 3 (so far). Speaking of discovering a show and watching insane amounts of it show in a short period of time - I am quite proud of my achievement of watching the entire series of The OC (92 episodes; 4 seasons) in less than a month. :)
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on June 22nd, 2007 10:30 am (UTC)
I am quite proud of my achievement of watching the entire series of The OC (92 episodes; 4 seasons) in less than a month. :)

That is quite the accomplishment! I think I took a little more time then you when I watched all of Farscape (also 4 seasons). I know it was under 2 months, but I don't think it was under 1.
Alayna: DW - A hand to hold[info]jess_squirrel on June 30th, 2007 05:52 am (UTC)
*g* I just loved this!! The characters were perfect and the whole thing was beautifully written. And...I can't think of anything more to add because the Doctor & Rose kissing is so thoroughly wonderful and distracting. *happy sigh*

Thank you!
Teska Future[info]teskafuture on June 30th, 2007 12:11 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you very much! *grin* I'm so glad that you thought the characters perfect as this was my very first Doctor Who fanfic.